Monday, March 5, 2012

I grabbed the ball and ran practice paragraph

The day started slow but as the day progressed I became more and more pumped for the battle as i saw my fellow warriors gear up, I did the same. I put my mask and my armor on then went out on the battlefield. We began staring at our enemy's then the game started so i grabbed the ball nobody was open then I ran and scored.

4 comments:

  1. I like your paragraph, and it is very detailed.

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  2. i liked your paragraph, it was veary detailed and it has a lot of meaning to it.

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  3. i like your paragraph but you didn't use any of the words you were suppose to use.

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  4. Why didn't you do your paragraph right .

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